First day shots!

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  1. 50two

    50two TPF Noob!

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    i got a new SLR for my birthday 2 days ago :) its an Olympus e410... not the greatest SLR i know and its not canon or nikon either but its good enough for me :D
    to be honest theyre not really my first day shots, my first shots were just pictures of random things in my room but that was just to get to know the system and buttons etc , SO these are my first day shots meaning the first day i actually took my camera out and took proper photos
    C+C please!

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    hankejp TPF Noob!

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    I am a noob and still trying to learn all this stuff, but a couple things that I see are:
    #1 - It looks crooked to me, neat looking picture though.
    #2 - Sort of boring for me, but that could just be me.
    #3 - Looks a little dark. Maybe try to brighten it a tad. Again looks crooked.
    #4 - My favorite picture. I just like the look of it.
    #5 - For me, there's too much happening in the picture and don't know what to look at. I believe it's the truck.
    Same as with number 2.

    The quality of the pics look good to me, but like I said, I'm just a Noob trying to grasp this photography thing.
     
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    Anubisyn TPF Noob!

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    agreed w/ ^^ maybe a lil over saturated on #6
     
  4. manaheim

    manaheim Jedi Bunnywabbit Staff Member Supporting Member

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    1-3 are *very* cool. You could do some color correction to strip out that orangeish cast, but in some cases I actually think it lends something to the picture- particularly in 3.

    Yes, definitely straighten 1, but leave 3 just as it is, angled and all. Neat shot.

    Love the dude walking/blurred on the tile in 2.

    I think maybe 1 and 2 could use a touch of brightening... maybe... might ruin the effect, but it might be neat to try.

    Really very artistic and creative! I'm jealous of your eye. Very nice. Thanks for sharing.
     
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    50two TPF Noob!

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    thanks everyone :)! i tried straightening out 1 but i couldnt tdo that without wonking the other floors D: ive never really known what color correctino does, but ill try it
     
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    manaheim Jedi Bunnywabbit Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Do a horizontal perspective adjustment in either photoshop or PTLens (by epaperpress). That should fix most of it.
     

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