first portrait style picture C&C please

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  1. iPhoto17

    iPhoto17 TPF Noob!

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    [​IMG]i know the picture is out of focus, so besides that, how is it?hows the angle? no flash was used, this is all natural lighting.(refering to bottom picture)[​IMG]
     
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    if you can, please edit as you see fit to make it any better
     
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    the first one has a good angle but there is too much information... the logos on the top laft and right tend to be focus point and that is not good for your main subject... you have enought information near your subject (the pool player) as i have shown with the red lines ... or try a blur on them or something...
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    the second one has the same probleme and also i would have tried to move a bit to your left to get his face a bit into the light
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    good luck
     
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    Is the second one OOF or is it just me?
     
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    he said that
     

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