First time doing food photography C&C please

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  1. shortpballer

    shortpballer TPF Noob!

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    Hey got asked to do some food photography for a local restaurant. Let me know what you think. Critiques are very welcome :)
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  2. digital flower

    digital flower No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Technically you did well with these but they lack some oomph. Some more exciting lighting might help a little.
     
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    As someone who never did serious food photography... :

    Picture 3 to 5 miss a light.

    Picture 5 needs some more exciting background. Good if nothing special needed is putting the bottles into the fridge for some(!) minutes before the shot, choose a white background and a closer angle to catch some of the drops.

    Somehow the focus on the salad seems not perfect to me.

    Maybe try replacing the black background on all pictures with white (Photoshop) if it suits you better. 1 & 2 look fine with black, 3 to 5 would probably be better on white.
     
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    Some food photogaphy is gross, but yours got REALLY good! I like it alot!! Keep it up!
     
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    they are good !

    u can do better in number 4

    its cropped
     
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    They're nice, I like them, but I think you can do better, like different angles, more interesting background, something like this, but still I like you pictures.
     
  7. baoxiong

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    My points didn't mean that they aren't good though! Keep it up! Picture 1 looks very yummi.
     

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