First Time posting please C&C

Discussion in 'Photography Beginners' Forum' started by mr.fab, May 3, 2010.

  1. mr.fab

    mr.fab TPF Noob!

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    Here are a few shots I took in last week or so around town.

    Coke in Hamilton
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    Halton Hills
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    A Creek in behind my House

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    Let me know what you think.
     
  2. photonewbie86

    photonewbie86 TPF Noob!

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    I like #1 the faded paint :D

    #2 the array of colours is good and good dof

    and the third onw it would be nice to see a bit more of the gnarled tree on the right side, but great job on them :D What camera are you shooting with?
     
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    I like how you cropped #1. The way you lined up the bottom of the frame parallel to the bottom brick course makes it look stable. The black triangle on the lower right annoys me.

    #2 and #3 are uninteresting. There's no real focus in either. The only thing that could be of any interest in #3 is all the way at the edge of the frame.
     
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    Thanks for the C & C. I am using a Nikkon d40
     
  5. Kimba

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    i agree with SwissJ on the lot, but will also add, watch your lines. The last pic is on a lean.
     

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