First Time posting please C&C

[mr.fab]

Here are a few shots I took in last week or so around town.

Coke in Hamilton

Halton Hills

A Creek in behind my House

Let me know what you think.

 

[photonewbie86]

I like #1 the faded paint

#2 the array of colours is good and good dof

and the third onw it would be nice to see a bit more of the gnarled tree on the right side, but great job on them What camera are you shooting with?

 

[SwissJ]

I like how you cropped #1. The way you lined up the bottom of the frame parallel to the bottom brick course makes it look stable. The black triangle on the lower right annoys me.

#2 and #3 are uninteresting. There's no real focus in either. The only thing that could be of any interest in #3 is all the way at the edge of the frame.

 

[mr.fab]

Thanks for the C & C. I am using a Nikkon d40

 

[Kimba]

i agree with SwissJ on the lot, but will also add, watch your lines. The last pic is on a lean.