Flowergirl PhotoShoot / Critiques Please

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by Kemal, May 26, 2008.

  1. Kemal

    Kemal TPF Noob!

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    Hi, I took these with my Pentax K10D, fa 50 and da 18-55 kit lens in conjunction with my Alien Bees strobes. The rest of the set is here: http://kemal.ca/mine//thumbnails.php?album=42

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  2. tirediron

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    Wow, amazing eyes! C&C per req:

    1. Nice composition and lighting, but the background is a little too busy for my taste. Perhaps a shallower DoF to decrease sharpness, or perhaps some artificial blurring in PP.

    2. Neat idea, but maybe a little too much open space abover her?

    3. Nice pose, but the tone is way too warm for my taste.

    4 and 5 don't really do much for me I'm afraid; technically they're fine, but the positioning of the flowers and the tight crop to her head just don't work for me.
     

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