Found a pic in my archives, I'd like C&C on

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  1. hankejp

    hankejp TPF Noob!

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    I was organizing some photos and came across this picture. I thought it was a pretty neat picture and was wondering your thoughts.

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    personaly i like the colors but i think you missed the focus, it is somewhere on the edge of the table which in itself is rather disturbing. the noise isn't helping either. i can see you had the rule of thirds in mind but you forgot to look at the lines in the picture... that table edge...
     
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    Thank you. I couldn't really tell is the speghetti was in focus or not. I'll have to try denoising it once.
     
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    If the edge of the table was in focus...I would like it much more.
    THe noise is rather distracting...but tolerable.

    Nice JOb!
     

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