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Discussion in 'The Black & White Gallery' started by mooseluver24, Jul 30, 2010.

  1. mooseluver24

    mooseluver24 TPF Noob!

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    A portrait from a recent Maternity shoot I had. I'm always a little sketchy about black and whites... what do you think about this one? C&C is very much appreciated.
     
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    Too gray, and the background on the left side is distracting.
     
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    I agree about it being too gray.. I wasn't sure if that was just me. Glad to know it isn't. I never even focused on the tree but now that you mention it, I agree with that too!
     
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    better or worse?

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    I know this is a little nit picky but I'm sad that her wedding ring is turned on it's side. I would like to see it. I think the wedding ring is a big part of the story line going on in the picture........the many stages that this family has gone through.

    B&W....I like the 2 one better.
     
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    A tiny pinge of the levels would do this pic good. Otherwise great motif. I love the tiny hands of a child touching from beneath takes this out of clich├ędom and into great pic-dom.
     

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