Girl in front of digi-wall

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  1. fotograf biel

    fotograf biel TPF Noob!

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    Hi, it's me again. I'm wondering what you people think of that picture. I'm happy with it. She's a "first-time-model" ... Thank's for C&C

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    Works for me. What about the rose?
     
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    fotograf biel TPF Noob!

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    thanks! The Tattoo should be mystic ... in some way :meh:
     
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    I think the lighting is nice. I hate the background. I'm not sure what to think of the pose. Overall, I think the pose gives it a bondage look really. I mean, her hands look bound behind her back and she is not looking at the camera, kinda like she's not going to give you the satisfaction even if she can't move. It's obvious you intended for her breasts to be a focal point, but I would've turned her slightly to show some curvature.

    Just my .02
     
  5. Big Mike

    Big Mike I am Big, I am Mike Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Too much space above her head, but otherwise I like it.
     
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    Maybe and 8x10 type crop on this was some dead space to her left. And I'd also be tempted to throw a full on texture on this one (just for the wall).
     
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    im feeling everything about this one.
     

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