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  1. iPwnF00lz

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    way overexposed and the angles all seem wrong to me
     
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    angles do seem wrong, since i'm a bit confused with where to look. the one that catches my interest most if the 4th one. because of its texture and leading lines. other than that, most of them are overexposed with details being washed out.
     
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    i like all of them, the colors could be better in 2 and 3 though
     
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    I'm not sure what to think. A lot of them don't seem to have a definite focal point in my opinion. :\
     
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    I agree with angles being kinda off, just keep playing around with different angles than you would normally think of.
    What I don't agree with is lots of other people said lots look overexposed... They look fine on my monitor, but mine isn't calibrated so that could be why, but they look perfectly exposed to me.
     
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    yeah the exposures are fine, i agree with the angles/focus points being off though. subjects are iffy as well.

    However, lowering the exposure can also richen the colors and make the picture look more realistic and have things pop out at you.

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    do you like these better?
     
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    wow they are all great, the last 4 didnt do much for me though
     
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    Thanks for the feedback guys, I agree, the angles are iffy and there isn't much of a focal point to them causing your eye to not really know what to look at. :/

    jwsciontc - I like those edits! What exactly did you do?
     
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    if your looking for extensive CC i would suggest only posting 2 or 3 shots... you will get more thorough CC that way
     
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    i darkened them a little, saturated and contrast boosted them a tad just to bring out some of the darker colors a little more
     
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    Okay thank you.
     

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