Happy Bday C&C

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  1. Hock

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    One from all the march bdays..

    my thoughts...
    - sides of the "happy birthday" are oof could have benefited from a larger fstop
    - white blur on right side and top black part is distracting
    - perhaps get the fruit into focus too

    what do you guys think?

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  2. settons

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    I like it, but I agree with the white on the right side, it is distracting

    Good work
     
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    You mean smaller f/stop? Larger f/stop would throw even more of it oof. (f/stop refers to the physical opening, not the number).
     
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    use a smaller f/stop like a few steps from what you shot that with. and i also agree with the white blurred object on the right side. the composition is appealing though. just fix the aperture and you'll be good.
     
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    Yeah DOF is really shallow, you should've increased your f/stop to expand it a bit.
     

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