How's this edit?

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  1. MohaimenK

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    Original??

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    Or Crispy??

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    Seems over done to me. The face is shaded out too much IMO. The skin should have a nice soft glow. It goes from dark tan and shaded out and fades over to blow out.
     
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    well it looks better than the original. The skin tone looks a little vivid. i agree with bryce on the face part.
     
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    that bathing suit looks much better from this angle than from the side. It's a snake attacking her bewb!
     
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    I can see you are trying to get emphasis on the model. How about this treatment? Very little is done to the model, but pushing back the setting helps give vibrancy to the model without overdoing the colours.

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    Boo ya
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    There you go! Thats it right there.

     
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    thought i'd have a go :)

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    Another quick edit.


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    Too many edits :lol:

    Schwetty's is my favourite edit, but I'd like to see the background taken down a just little as oldmacman suggests.
     
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    Schwettylens's edit is the direction I think you need to go.
    In your edit she's almost orange.
     
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    You don't have to go all fancy really. Mo.. your shot was underexposed and I really felt like the WB is off. Just correcting the two on your RAW will improve your photo a lot! Then you can do the fancy stuff afterward (removing cellulite, wrinkles on swimsuit etc.).
     

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