I call this tetnis shot lol

[a2dadamm]

First not sure if that how you spell tetnis, lol..

anyways I was playing with this one shot i have, I like it and I dont like it
here are 2 versions of it after some PP.

LMK what you guys think, feel fre to coment/edit your own version or what ever.
as always thanks for veiwing.

 

[artoledo]

Its actually "Tetanus". its a nice shot. Leaves a lot for the imagination.

 

[Jon_Are]

Creative title, but the images do not do much for me. They're underexposed (particularly the first), and they are way over-saturated for my taste. The composition is semi-interesting, with the diagonal lines and all. The colors in #2 are so far off it's a major distraction.

Maybe if you de-saturate and bring the exposure up a bit on #1?

Jon

 

[linpelk]

I was REALLY afraid to open this one. I was imagining a rusty nail in someone's foot..whew!!!

I like the shot. Interesting lines. I like #1 best.

 

[TiCoyote]

They're a little dark. The colors are attractive. I think they're cropped too close.

 

[a2dadamm]

thank for your imput and the correct spelling, lol :hug::

I see what you guys are saying and i feel the same way, it's an old shot i've had for a while and it's been just bugging me everytime i open my albums it's there. so i was bored and played around with it. but like i said im on the fence about it.

but thanks for your views and comments i appreciate them:thumbup: