In a field under grey skies

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  1. JOSHardson

    JOSHardson No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    He is a little out of focus but I like the way the sky turned out.[​IMG]
     
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    Skies look great,
    however my crit of this photo is:
    Composition is a bit plain, the central horizon line across the cheast is unflattering.
    It looks like you used a wide angle lens for this, I'm geussing 18mm?
    Anyway, try stick to +50mm to try and eliminate distortion.
    And it looks a little bit lucisart, which is a sharpening plugin, on the foreground.
    perhaps a little less pp sharpness, wouldve improved the image.
    And his face looks bruised on the right side (our right his left).
    Perhaps dodge it out it photoshop.

    But I do very much like the grassy field and the jandals, and your models casual stance.

    good job.
     
  3. JOSHardson

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    The wide open shot was something I was trying to get... It wasn't the lens causing distortion, it was because this is a merged photo... I think it was six actually. Thanks for the critique...
     

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