Discussion in 'People Photography' started by JOSHardson, Aug 14, 2009.
He is a little out of focus but I like the way the sky turned out.
Skies look great,
however my crit of this photo is:
Composition is a bit plain, the central horizon line across the cheast is unflattering.
It looks like you used a wide angle lens for this, I'm geussing 18mm?
Anyway, try stick to +50mm to try and eliminate distortion.
And it looks a little bit lucisart, which is a sharpening plugin, on the foreground.
perhaps a little less pp sharpness, wouldve improved the image.
And his face looks bruised on the right side (our right his left).
Perhaps dodge it out it photoshop.
But I do very much like the grassy field and the jandals, and your models casual stance.
The wide open shot was something I was trying to get... It wasn't the lens causing distortion, it was because this is a merged photo... I think it was six actually. Thanks for the critique...
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