Jessa

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  1. DIRT

    DIRT TPF Noob!

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    Im trying to get into portraits, let me have it.

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  2. LittleMan

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    she looks like a doll! haha

    Awesome photo, wonderful crop.

    Great job!:thumbup:
     
  3. craig

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    Beautiful! The light makes a nice shape on the subjects face. The text on the photo is kind of a bummer.
     
  4. Verbal

    Verbal $100

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    Spectacular portrait! The black and white makes it all the more awesome, in my opinion.
     
  5. Christie Photo

    Christie Photo No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    It appears you've made it!

    This is a simply wonderful portrait. Well lit (I LOVE the large, soft catch lights), well composed, and good presentation.

    -Pete Christie
     
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    I think the lighting is very well done and you're tones really bring out her eyes which is just awesome. I think this is a vrey good portrait.
     
  7. chroix

    chroix In Latin it's "spikius conius thingonius"

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    Real nice. What was your set up? Love the lighting. It is soft and warm even for BW.. real nice. cute kid too.
     
  8. Big Mike

    Big Mike I am Big, I am Mike Staff Member Supporting Member

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    The soft lighting is wonderful, great job. I would like to see some catch lights in her eye though.
     
  9. Alison

    Alison Swiss Army Friend Supporting Member

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    I agree with Mike, catch lights would be nice, but the overall lighting is very well done. I like the close crop, but seeing only part of her chin bothers me just a little. You caught a really wonderful expression, very well done :thumbsup:
     

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