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Discussion in 'Photography Beginners' Forum' started by Invictus, Jun 21, 2009.

  1. Invictus

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    2. Random At Beach
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    3. Fiancé Silhouette
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    4. Poop Machine
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    5. Rustic Truck
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  2. Invictus

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    I am rather fond of the last one. great textures in the pealing paint. I want to see more though. I am not fond of the crop on it. How was the original shot, vertically, or horizontally?
     
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    Just a little on the right was cropped, too much bokeh. horizontal originally.
     
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    Too much bokeh?

    Care to post the whole image?
     
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    Ahh...
    Bummer.
    It's lighter farther away, which really leads away from the great decay that you focused on. I am not fond of the square crop for this, but I like what you were aiming for. Thanks for posting more of the image too. It can help teach others why you did what you did, with what you had.

    I think it might look good cropped just after the M for a verticle composition.
    I did some tinkering with it, if you care to see. But I think I took it farther away from your intent.
     
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  8. Invictus

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    My Photos Are OK to Edit... POST!!! lol
     
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    Thanks for letting me toy with your image. I really see that you have some tough decisions for croping this depending on what you want. I like the abstract quality, since the large view had issues, so I went with that. This is just my opinion and view.

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    But after stepping away and coming back, I think you could keep the whole "Maple" thing there and crop the top down, for a horizontal image with some nice textures and lines.

    Does anyone else feel the lettering is a distraction, or am I off my rocker here?
     

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