light house

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  1. danielsmith4213

    danielsmith4213 TPF Noob!

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    hey guys, i went on a holiday this weekend and took this snap of a lighthouse. Feedback and crit would be much appreciated :wink: Thanks

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    nice capture and exposure. I like how the clouds, which are almost as important as the lighthouse itself, are not blown out. They almost seem to wrap around the lighthose.

    Is there a reason why you have the lighthouse framed to the left? I know at times the subject looks best when not set dead in the center. In this case, it places a bit of dead space to the right... which doesn't seem intentional.
     
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    yes i realized that it was framed a bit wrong, if I cropped the dead space out would it be more affective? thanks for the crit
     
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    I agree, I feel it should be cropped so the lighthouse is centered. Other than that I dont think I would change anything.
     
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    I like it! Looks great in mono!
     
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    I think it looks way better cropped

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