Little Boys, C&C please!

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  1. Lacey Anne

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    #1 (Twins)
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    #2 (Serious twins)
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    #3
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    #4
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    #5
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    For all of these I used a light to the left with a reflector on the right and a bounced, diffused flash. Would love some c&c as I'm practicing. :)
     
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    I reallly like #4!! Great job :)
     
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    Well, thank you, Kelly!
     
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    I like them too 1 and 4 the most
     
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    I think I like 2 & 4 the best. Cute boys. :) :wink:
     
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    i like 1 and three with the smiles. 3 has a nice wistful smile.
     
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    Thanks everyone! No critiques though? Really? I must be doing better. Someone has to notice a flaw...
     
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    ell sense you asked...not that I am anywhere close to perfect

    I dont like how close in the last one is...it isnt the head cut off its the chin, makes him look like he has a short chin...and the head is cut in #1

    The catch lights could be much larger to grab attention in all photos

    I dont like words on peoples shirts in photos

    There is shadow in 2 and the blanket and the kid looking away doesnt do it for me.


    wb looks a little off in #4

    But still, they are really nice overall. Much to be proud of!
     
  9. Lacey Anne

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    lol! Thanks! I actually like the words on the shirts... But that's me for my kids. I agree with everything else you said.
     
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    I really like #4 the best (great contrasting colors) and #5. #3 seems too bright? (Please understand that I am a total amateur)

    Regardless, you really do a fantastic job!!

    Sue
     
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    i really love number 4 but his temperature looks REALLY warm. (that could very well be my monitor)
     
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    I used a plugin on #3 that I'm really not sure about. I kinda liked the light, wimsical feel, but still... I do think it got too bright. Ah, well, expiramenting is still fun. And thank you!
     

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