little sister -critique please

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  1. Mike888

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  3. MDowdey

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    still not workin bro.



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  4. hobbes28

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    You have to click on the link up there and then click on go when it gives you the error message. Weird.

    I like this picture. I really like how the picture is sharper on the details of her face and the tire. That and the conrast is good. It looks like a picture that was taken way back in the day. Good work.
     
  5. Mike888

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    so for the confusingness but ^^^ he/she has got it right.
     
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    Your photo hosting site apparently tries to block hotlinking to message boards as most hosting sites do. For free hosting that still allows pictures to show normally on meassage boards like this one try www.photobucket.com
     
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    i had pb before but then i kept getting random problems and stuff i think i might try again tho...thanks for the advice

    anyone esle with some critiques?
     
  10. MDowdey

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    mike, i like this shot alot as it captures emotion and childhood. but my eye gets confused on the bottom left of the frame...almost like i cant make out what is in her lap...i think its more of a scanning thing though


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    Very unique shot.
     
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    Did you add some solarizing effect or something? Some of the tones seem odd to me. I think that white section of her head is way too bright. It's almost like she's wearing a phantom of the opera mask.
     

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