Discussion in 'General Critical Analysis' started by cherrymoose, Aug 19, 2007.
Feel free to rip it apart-- I want honest C&C. :thumbup:
I'm not going to mess with you on this, I'll just be blunt; I'm not seeing it- what you are trying to get across.
To me, it looks like it should be part of a notecard, maybe a get well card. As art ... *shrug* Not really sure on things to improve other than subject matter. For a picture of half a mug of tea, it's nice.
Hummmm, how do you know it's half full?
Frankly I do not see anything to keep my interest.....and I looked to see if there was any tea in it!!!:lmao:
Half of the mug is cut out of the picture, that's how it's half of a mug.
I'm afraid there wasn't anything there to keep my attention, and I can't really decide what you were going for, but sometimes that whole air of mystery can work. Not this time, sorry.
Since half of the mug is out of the picture, how can you tell if there is a bottom and that it contains tea????
Must be a extatentialism thing......
I like it.
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