Midnight Tea

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  1. cherrymoose

    cherrymoose TPF Noob!

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    Feel free to rip it apart-- I want honest C&C. :thumbup:

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  2. abraxas

    abraxas No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Emma,

    I'm not going to mess with you on this, I'll just be blunt; I'm not seeing it- what you are trying to get across.
     
  3. Emily91183

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    To me, it looks like it should be part of a notecard, maybe a get well card. As art ... *shrug* Not really sure on things to improve other than subject matter. For a picture of half a mug of tea, it's nice. :)
     
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    Hummmm, how do you know it's half full?

    Frankly I do not see anything to keep my interest.....and I looked to see if there was any tea in it!!!:lmao:
     
  5. Trenton Romulox

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    Half of the mug is cut out of the picture, that's how it's half of a mug.

    I'm afraid there wasn't anything there to keep my attention, and I can't really decide what you were going for, but sometimes that whole air of mystery can work. Not this time, sorry.
     
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    Since half of the mug is out of the picture, how can you tell if there is a bottom and that it contains tea????

    Must be a extatentialism thing......:sexywink:
     
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    Good God.
    I like it.
     

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