Model and Firetruck

Discussion in 'Photography Beginners' Forum' started by max3k, Jul 17, 2010.

  1. max3k

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    Thought I would share one from today's shoot. feel free to C&C if you want.

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    You have some serious color clash going on here. I feel like I'm looking at a bowl of jelly beans. Her hand, obviously, is a problem. It's cut off, out of focus, and too near the camera.
     
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    exposure is good. the subject is a tad soft. i don't like her hand being cut off. and i don't like the way that the photo makes her arm look really long.
     
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    take the spots out of her arm and some on her face and you're good to go
     
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    Image just doesn't make sense to me. What's the point posing in front of a bunch of pressure gagues?
     
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    it is a nice photo but I don't understand why she posed in front of the pressure gauges of the fire truck and not the front or by a ladder or something and I would have seen if you could have borrowed a helmet and jacket and had her wear it and pose in front of the fire truck
     
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    Nice pump panel :drool:
    Not a fan of her hand cut off though
     
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    soft and the arm is killin it for me.
     

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