My first model shoot!!!!

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  1. OttawaPhotog

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    Okay so I have posted my few first wedding photos in another thread and I thought I would post my first model photo shoot here as well! Again C&C welcome!! I had tons of fun while shooting with her and I will definitely do it again!

    Enjoy!

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    Thanks for looking!!
     
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    In pics 1 and 3 she doesnt look like she wants to be there, however the last one is very nice.
     
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    #3 is a real winner! #2 is bringing the rest down tho. Overall great job, and she is very pretty.
     
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    Huh. The second is my favorite, but I really like them all. The second shows a lot of "tude". Love it.
     
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    I disagree with Tyler and agree with Cindy. The #2 street shot is awesome! #1 to me is kinda not working because she looks too fake in the chest area. Just my opinion. I really like the tilt in #3. Great job on #4 too. Very nice overall.

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    #2 for me as well. Nice work
     
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    I don't like the pole/flags coming out of her head in #2 but the rest are nice...especially #4!
     
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    I like no.2 and 4. the pole isn't distracting to me at all in no.2 even when I went back for another look, and I just love the composition, the expression and the lighting in no.4. 1 an 3 weren't appealing to me, but still nice work for all of them.
     
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    Ya....I would do it again, too ;)...lol.

    Anyways, they're good shots. I like the placement of her hips in #2...really sexy.
     
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    I like her attitude and walking down the street is fine, but I think the background is too distracting. Not so much a fan of #1, but I really like #4.
     
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    They're pretty good, as said before lose the pole in two. H
     
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    Great pics + Great model.
     

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