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  1. Shilowe

    Shilowe TPF Noob!

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    I have looked at some amazing photos on here! Here are some of my most recent work...

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    Several appear to be slightly out of focus. In the first two, it appears that maybe the camera was focusing on the forehead, and not quite on the eyes. Very nice overall!
     
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    Didn't someone else recently post all of these pictures on another thread? xxx
     
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    Sorry? Not that I am aware of...this is the only thread I've started so far. I would be very upset if someone else did!
     
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    I love the 4th and 6th ones best.

    Not lovin' the 3rd one at all - too snapshotty, does look out of focus, doesn't grab you in any way, and the location of the child in the frame seems awkward (though I'm on my laptop and having to scroll to see the whole pic so that might have something to do with it) - maybe it'd have worked better if you got in tight.

    I like the ducks on #1, but not sure I like the angle - maybe more on the diagonal would be nicer.

    #2 I would've preferred the camera shifted to the right a bit (rule of thirds would've worked for this one - and that would've prevented his pinky from being cut off).
     

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