New portfolio

Discussion in 'Personal and Professional Photography Websites' started by mentos_007, Jul 5, 2006.

  1. mentos_007

    mentos_007 The Freshmaker!

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    So here's my rebuilt portfolio: www.mentos.lnet.szn.pl/blekitna
    I know the adress is a bit too long but I'm waiting for a better one... soon...

    What do you think about my site/design/photos?
    Is English version ok? Does something sound iffy or it's fine??
     
  2. Reverend

    Reverend TPF Noob!

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    Grammatical corrections are bolded

    I wasn't sure if "always" was the appropriate word in "and progress is unfinished." I think it fits the statement well, but it is subjective.

    I would rewrite the last paragraph a little bit more like this:

    If you would like to share my photography experience with you, please feel free to contact me. I can offer the prints at a very reasonable price to compliment your apartment or office decor.
     
  3. mentos_007

    mentos_007 The Freshmaker!

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    thank you a lot! Well.. with this progress part, it is rather a philosofical question... :)
     
  4. mysteryscribe

    mysteryscribe TPF Noob!

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    I like the images a lot
     

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