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  1. Allsmiles7282

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    I took this photo over the weekend and I liked the composition of the photo but something just seems off to me. What do you think?

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    Just a personal opinion but I think if its about the dog and his world, the single leg is out of place. In my opinion body parts without a body hit me like nails on a blackboard. I would have cloned it out.

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  3. Cuervo79

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    I desagree, I like the leg, Although what I find lacking is more sharpness everything is too soft, wich I don't find ok because of the contrast
     
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    yep why they make horse races...
     
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    i like the leg. i think the dog looks blurry though
     
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    Well the odds on the horse without legs just got longer.
     
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    Brilliant!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
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    There are two legs in there, maybe burn one out into the visible spectrum. But I do agree with mystery, the floating limb is somewhat awkward.<--- how do you spell that?
     
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    Off topic, but how many viewers check out art books and classic photography.
    Sheesh.
     
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    I haven't read one in years but i used to read them religiously. er er that was back in the day lol
     
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    Well thanks for all your comments everyone. I burned out the other leg a bit and ran an USM over the image and I think it really helped! I knew that someone would figure out what it needed! Great Job!! :thumbup:

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    **elsaspset, thank you for your compliment. I so much admire your work so it means a lot coming from you! :)
     
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    Much better...
     

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