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  1. Rudha

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    in this photo i kinda wanted to show although fame puts in you in spotlight it also emphasizes your "shadows" .....also what do you think would be good title?...i am thinking "shadow reveal"...anyways thanks in advance
     
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    I like the image. I think the figure's face could be a bit sharper. Don't worry about people interpreting it as you interpret it. Allow viewers to draw their own conclusions.

    The title should probably come from you. I guess you could call it "In the Shadow of Fame"
     
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    I like it! TiCoyote has the perfect title too!! :)
     
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    thank you guys.....
    EDIT: actually i like the title very much.....it's brilliant
     
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    i like the shot...

    like prev posted said the focus is slightly off...

    also, why not use a low iso and longer exposure w/ your tripod to get less noise... unless u wanted the noise...
     
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    well actually the noise is pp....the original is shot at ISO 200 ..i thought the noise would give it a better feel...and the focus thing was deliberate too but now i feel that focus on the face would have done justice ....i was focusing the shadow
     

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