Overlooked photos

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  1. Lackoffunding

    Lackoffunding TPF Noob!

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    I came across these shots and thought that some may have potential... your thoughts? Critique welcome.

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  2. DRodgers

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    I really like #1 but it could be more interesting with a bit of work ..
     
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    Lackoffunding TPF Noob!

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    Im up for suggestion.
     
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    By cropping some you can bring more attention to the building and bike.

    I would crop to the first horizontal line on the road gets rid of the ugly pavement and right crop behind the sign on the roof gets rid of the electrical gauges and the adjacent store ..

    from there it really depends how much is needed I would think a bit more cropping on the left maybe and some tweaking to bring out the blacks in the image..
     
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    i like how everything is out of focus but the car isnt in the 3rd
     
  6. LaFoto

    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Yes, Photo 1 has potential but sorely needs the crop that DRodgers is suggesting, and hadn't he suggested it, I would have. It will be much stronger then.

    And nice panning in the last. Looks like you pulled that one off! Good.

    The middle one?
    Nah! Not really --- says I. It may speak to others, though, what do I know?
     
  7. Lackoffunding

    Lackoffunding TPF Noob!

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    That is much nicer with the crop. Thanks for the replies.
     

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