Pictures From Today, i need some critics.

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  1. PMphotography

    PMphotography TPF Noob!

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    the model in all of these pictures was my girlfriend Lizbeth.

    Sand Scribbles
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    the tough picture
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    Lizzy in wonderland
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    1. Love it. Wouldn't change anything.

    2. I like the composition, but there seems to be a few hot spots.

    3. The big empty sky, for my taste, takes up way too much of the picture. I'd crop and make the pretty girl more prominent.
     
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    Number one is my fav. The third one has a weird green spot in the bottom left. Nice job!
     
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    I dont care for #1...the composition isnt that interesting, I dont like the sepia, and its underexposed. If you were trying to make her a silhouette, you need to make your shutter speed a bit faster to make her black. It's too strange just seeing part of her like that.

    2. This one is nice, but I would get rid of the vignette, it doesnt add anything to the picture.

    3. This one looks like an HDR gone bad. The oversharpening/saturation look terrible. Also the green lens flare is distracting, I would clone that out.

    All these photos need work on composition, with the exception of #2. This is my favorite, the subject is placed a little off center and the wood railings lead your eye right to her.
     
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    Interesting. I would actually prefer a little more sky to #3 because it would enhance the squatting position of the sugject. Nice job.
     

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