Please critique!

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  1. superemone

    superemone TPF Noob!

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    Shot these with my 40d and 50 mm 1.8 lens. I'm very very new to photography but love portraitures. Please critique and give me some inputs. Thanks!

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    Experiment with silhouette. Pose isn't good. Please advise on exposure.

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  2. reg

    reg TPF Noob!

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    Looks a little dark on my monitor.
     
  3. ANDS!

    ANDS! No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Har har.

    With that one, I think what she has on is affecting the pose as much as the "pose". If she were nude, you wouldn't see the bulges or the bra/t-shirt strap.

    First one looks a teeny bit underdone. . .maybe kick up the contrast and lighten it a tad.

    Second one seems a bit soft on the face.
     

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