Portrait at night

[oceridwanudin]

Plz give me some feedback to improve my skill

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[Granddad]

You got the eyes and the smile, the lighting is pretty good, too. To me the dots on the right make this landscape orientation portrait work.
If I haven't said it before (getting old, memory shot! ) welcome to the forum.

 

[oceridwanudin]

You got the eyes and the smile, the lighting is pretty good, too. To me the dots on the right make this landscape orientation portrait work.
If I haven't said it before (getting old, memory shot! ) welcome to the forum.

Thank you for your feedback,sir


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[droaingsong]

I would have covered the right ear with hair if it was me.

 

[Designer]

The lighting should be more subdued for a night portrait. Think "mood" here. The background is nearly non-existent, so include something more in the background.

 

[Rick50]

The pose is good but the lighting is weak. The hair just goes completely black and disappears into the background.

 

[oceridwanudin]

I would have covered the right ear with hair if it was me.

Ooh ic ic..thank you for your feedback


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[oceridwanudin]

The lighting should be more subdued for a night portrait. Think "mood" here. The background is nearly non-existent, so include something more in the background.

Ok i'll try to add something in the background such as the light street or light cars in the next photo shot.thx designer


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[oceridwanudin]

The pose is good but the lighting is weak. The hair just goes completely black and disappears into the background.

So what should i do to improve the light?could you give me some another advice?or should i add some light behind the model?cause right now i only have one speedlight for the lighting..thx for your feedback Rick50


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[tirediron]

The pose is good but the lighting is weak. The hair just goes completely black and disappears into the background.

So what should i do to improve the light?could you give me some another advice?or should i add some light behind the model?cause right now i only have one speedlight for the lighting..thx for your feedback Rick50


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A rim light (one behind the model pointing at her) would have provided separation from the background. Looking at this on my monitor, I see detail and separation in the hair, 'though that could be improved.

 

[oceridwanudin]

The pose is good but the lighting is weak. The hair just goes completely black and disappears into the background.

So what should i do to improve the light?could you give me some another advice?or should i add some light behind the model?cause right now i only have one speedlight for the lighting..thx for your feedback Rick50


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A rim light (one behind the model pointing at her) would have provided separation from the background. Looking at this on my monitor, I see detail and separation in the hair, 'though that could be improved.

Ooh i see, okay. thank you tirediron


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[Donde]

I like the stark lighting. Good job.

 

[oceridwanudin]

I like the stark lighting. Good job.

Thank you,donde


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