oceridwanudin
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Plz give me some feedback to improve my skill
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You got the eyes and the smile, the lighting is pretty good, too. To me the dots on the right make this landscape orientation portrait work.
If I haven't said it before (getting old, memory shot! ) welcome to the forum.
I would have covered the right ear with hair if it was me.
The lighting should be more subdued for a night portrait. Think "mood" here. The background is nearly non-existent, so include something more in the background.
The pose is good but the lighting is weak. The hair just goes completely black and disappears into the background.
A rim light (one behind the model pointing at her) would have provided separation from the background. Looking at this on my monitor, I see detail and separation in the hair, 'though that could be improved.The pose is good but the lighting is weak. The hair just goes completely black and disappears into the background.
So what should i do to improve the light?could you give me some another advice?or should i add some light behind the model?cause right now i only have one speedlight for the lighting..thx for your feedback Rick50
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A rim light (one behind the model pointing at her) would have provided separation from the background. Looking at this on my monitor, I see detail and separation in the hair, 'though that could be improved.The pose is good but the lighting is weak. The hair just goes completely black and disappears into the background.
So what should i do to improve the light?could you give me some another advice?or should i add some light behind the model?cause right now i only have one speedlight for the lighting..thx for your feedback Rick50
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I like the stark lighting. Good job.