Yeah, I agree with dab_20, to a point. I mean, I am actually a fan of blown out photos, but that's just my personal style. But, she's right on the money with the eyes being too dark, in my opinion. And she's also right about it being creative. In fact, I'd just say dab_20 is right and I'm basically just repeating what she said. Haha. But yes, this is a very fresh take on the traditional portrait, and for that, I applaud you. It's tough to develop new ideas, and you've done well. Good stuff!