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Discussion in 'Photography Beginners' Forum' started by Kylerood, Nov 17, 2009.

  1. Kylerood

    Kylerood TPF Noob!

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    Hi i just threw this together in the past 30 minutes tell me what you think.


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    If I had to choose one I would say the center one
    The 1st too much light reflected off the button you can't even see the writing
    the 3rd is too bright

    hey hey whatever happened to jordache jeans LOL those commercials where annoying as hell
     
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    haha i wasnt going for any sort of branding situation with the shots so the detail of the brand wasnt important to me. the first and third are bright on purpose, maybe thats distracting.
     
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    robertwsimpson No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    I don't get it.
     
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    I was just kinda trying to represent two extremes and something nice in the middle

    notice the blown out white in number one

    and the darkest blacks in number 3

    the middle picture is exposed properly and is in perfect focus.
     
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    robertwsimpson No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    the bright one just looks like a dark one that has been inverted.
     
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    :er::confused: I get what you are saying now but upon inial viewing nobody will know what it is that you where trying to do unless they read the replies.
     
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    I would have like it better if the one on the right was mirrored so the 'curve' in the buttons was the opposite to that in the first one, giving a bit more symmetry to the set.
     
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    Did you even look at the picture?
    haha...


    Thanks for the criticism
     

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