Recent bridal portraits

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  1. Nell12

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    I love the tones and the textures... but it almost looks like she is sad.

    sad isn't usually the feeling people want to portray in wedding photos.
     
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    Wow, what a beautiful bride. I really love the tones in this photo, as a side note though, I would have had her adjust the bodice of the dress, as her undergarment is showing. Also she has one strap on her shoulder ,and one off the shoulder. I'm not sure if this was on purpose or not...?
     
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    As stated above, I love the tones. Both photos look great. I would try to clone out the strap in the first shot though and maybe just a very, very slight airbrush on the skin imperfections. Last suggestion, I would maybe do the same prints with different tones... maybe something brighter with stronger colors. As stated earlier, it does look kinda sad... but I still love the look alot! Great job overall :)

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    Honestly I don't think she looks sad at all. It seems to me she has a pretty pronounced smile in the first one. I like both of them alot the only criticisim I moght have is that the second one looks a little green.
     
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    I agree. And I would try to soften her skin in #2.




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    location seems really neat !! where did you go to find it...
     

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