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  1. Phazan

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    Critique is appreciated!

    1...Tried to capture the stress some people have after a day of work...Did I succeed?
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    4...Too boring?
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  2. MarcusM

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    I like #1. Where was 3 taken at? I used to go to SF all the time (I love that city) but I never saw that sculpture.
     
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    #1 was a really nice way to capture the stress ;) and for #4, maybe a boring subject, but from the artistic view it was a great shot!
     
  4. Phazan

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    Number 3 was taken somewhere between the Embarcadero Bart station, and Ghirardelli square..Somewhere along that main tourist road.

    Thanks for the comments!
     
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    #1 definately shows stress... looks like he just didnt quite make it on time to catch the train. great shots...
     
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    Much better that the first posting, #1 definitely shows stress, #2-3 are technically well done. #4 the hotspots on the neck draw away attention from the very nice details captured in the eye and beak.
     
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    oh man. The first shot really reminds me of the subway here in Stockholm during the rush hour -.- definitely not something I want to do every day if I don't have to.
    nice shot!
     
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    i see the stress in 1
    but would have made that amazing
    is if the womans head was down showing more emotion, it would have shown a scene as if the people both missed the ?subway?

    but i like it
     
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    Haha! Now that I look more close it looks like the woman was hit on the cheek by the train. Funny that :D
     
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    Hey, thanks for all the comments!

    And the funny thing about number 1 is the stress you see, isn't about the train, haha. The trains come there every 5 minutes or so. The people in the station just seemed so depressed, and stressed out..I guess from their jobs.
     

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