Self-Portraits

Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by Moni, Nov 15, 2004.

  1. Moni

    Moni TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Feb 20, 2004
    Messages:
    361
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Chittagong
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    [​IMG]



    [​IMG]
     
  2. Harry99

    Harry99 TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Nov 14, 2004
    Messages:
    136
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Manchester uk
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    Number 1 is a very good photo Moni, you've captured your expression very well, you look like you are staring straight into my eyes, from my monitor.
     
  3. santino

    santino TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Jun 17, 2004
    Messages:
    2,240
    Likes Received:
    12
    Location:
    Austria, heart in Poland -->
    I like both pics Moni!!!

    #2 is a bit overeposed IMO, it has a few white spots.
     
  4. ksmattfish

    ksmattfish Now 100% DC - not as cool as I once was, but still

    Joined:
    Aug 25, 2003
    Messages:
    7,021
    Likes Received:
    34
    Location:
    Lawrence, KS
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos NOT OK to edit
    I like the tight crop on the top of #2, but there is too much space at the bottom. Crop the bottom up to under your mouth, so that the lips are about as far from the bottom edge as the eyes are from the top edge.
     
  5. rdodson

    rdodson TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Nov 9, 2004
    Messages:
    26
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Kansas City, Mo
    The second image is more dramatic, but as it was said, a little crop would help.
     
  6. Moni

    Moni TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Feb 20, 2004
    Messages:
    361
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Chittagong
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    Yeap..you're correct...2nd one should be cropped more....

    Thanks to you all :D
     

Share This Page