some.new.stuff.from.a.new.member. {LQQK}

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  1. AR3

    AR3 TPF Noob!

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    here.are.some.of.my.shots.

    any.advice./opinions.?.i.appreciate.it.

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    Last one is my favorite, shouldn't have had such a close crop on the cologne bottle. Just my $.02
     
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    i.dont.know.if.i.want.to.reply.when.i.put.periods.in.arbitrarily.to.be.artistic.

    ;)
     
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    lol:lol:
     
  5. AR3

    AR3 TPF Noob!

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    :lol:

    i.need.some.feedback.!.. . . . . . . . . . ..

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    Coming from one new guy to another, to me its about half and half. I see some good shots imo and then i also see some that just seem like snapshots. The ones that i do like are pretty good though, i like the one with the silver balls and the last one is good too. It seems like you will make great progress as i hope to also. Keep up the good work!
     
  7. AR3

    AR3 TPF Noob!

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    thanks.but.can.you.be.more.specific....

    why.a.certain.photo.is.effective.while.the.other.
    lacks/sucks? .....
     
  8. LaFoto

    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    AR, welcome.
    Please try hardest not to alienate people on here by your way of writing.
    Write like we all do.
    Please.


    Personally, I don't like the colour manipulations and colourful frames at all.
    The lone shoe looks accidental.
    The reflecting balls (second photo?) are nicely captured, so is the bottle of Cologne, but I also strongly feel that you cropped in too closely and better shouldn't have lost the top and bottom.
    I also quite like the lines and overall composition of what I think is Photo 5 --- one tip: if you post as many photos as you did now, do make sure there are a) SPACES between them, and that b) your photos are numbered.

    And re-think your way of writing... friendly advice.
     
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    HASHASHIN TPF Noob!

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    maybe his spacebar is broken.....
     
  10. LaFoto

    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Yes, maybe. And the Q key has moved over to where the O is and all...
     
  11. MrMatthieu

    MrMatthieu TPF Noob!

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    To my opinion your colour shots are very Kitsch, specialy with these borders
    and B&W have a deficient composition and without composition B&W shots are not attractive.

    Your picture look like the results of afunny game, but if you had a good time that s already a good point ;)
     
  12. AR3

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    I will switch up the writing :p

    A funny game? I really dont know what you mean?

    The contrast and composition isn't that bad is it?
     

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