some pictures i was taking

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  1. bpro35

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    #1 I think the blur takes away from the photo, if he were closer, or if he were looking at you it might be better.

    #2 I like, I've always been a sucker for the sun/lens flare

    #3 Is ok, I think the tree ruins the shot.. its sort of boring and blurred looking. the colors are weird to me.

    #4 is cool, about to take the plunge!
     
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    #1 - Don't mind the blur at all, in fact kind of like it. What I don't like is the satellite dish, the air conditioner, and the hose.

    #2 - Sometimes I like flare, but this one doesn't do it for me. The picture just doesn't have a strong enough composition to me.

    #3 - Star trails are cool and you got them to work. Would be nice if the tree was a bit more interesting subject and it was in sharp focus.

    #4 - I think you missed the best part of the action when he dropped off the lip of that tube. Could you get down below and have him flying above you?
     
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    I love #4 but the background is very distracting. If it was just the sky he would *pop* a lot more from the photo. But because of the mountain I had to do a double take and figure out what was going on. Plus he looks a little underexposed in areas. And last... try and get closer next time. There's too much dead space around him. Remember... when you can get in closer... DO IT.
     

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