Spikes *not work safe*

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  1. DramaDork626

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    I wanna know some stuff about the composition, sorry, im in a hurry, so I got straight to the point

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    I'm not sure what I'm looking at or why it's considered not work safe.
     
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    Something about the composition isn't quite right...
     
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    The arm in the back seems to be taking away, rather than adding to the image. Also, the hot spot on the buckle in the front is taking away from the spikes. Maybe if the buckle were in sharper focus...but they way it is...I find it hard to see the spikes as a strong enough focal point.
     
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    LOL you guys.........I look and see orange hills, and you guys see cleavage, and an arm. Sorry DD, I honestly didn't know what it was.
    I guess I'm gonna have to put on my "man" hat next time. :lol:
     
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    I look and see orange hills, and you guys see cleavage, and an arm. Sorry DD[/quote]

    for a minute i though you were guessing something. i think drama or dork would be better than DD :mrgreen:
     
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    for a minute i though you were guessing something. i think drama or dork would be better than DD :mrgreen:[/QUOTE]


    Hahahaha, I get it
     
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    Beautiful!!! You captured the landscape of the human form with nice light.

    Critically. The yellow cast is a tad difficult. Try a crop just below the spike.
     
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    care to be more specific?
     
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    ahahaha..looks clevage..

    and oh..

    have you seen the picture of a dessert during sunset it shows in your masterpiece..

    great..
     
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    what if it was shot horizontal and the spikes crossed the pic at 3rds or something... i find the arm distracting maybe if it was shot alittle higher and down on the cleav... just some thoughts
     

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