Starting to venture into portraits C&C please

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  1. Ub3rdoRK

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    This is my first shot ive done in this field. The day was kind of overcast so no blue sky..and i didnt use my flash because my stupid ass forgot my batteries for it.
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    Very nice background for this picture! even though the lighting is a little dark i personally dont think it takes away from this shot. i like that shes holding the flower.. the pose seems a little uncomfortable, but works none the less. Shes got that seductive look to her eyes..kind of like a temptress or something lol
     
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    Very nice shot, although I think she has a bit too much headroom.
     
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    nice! The pose seems slighty strained though.
     
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    Inwas thinking of the same thing. I may crop it some. Tha k you guys for feedback. It helps greatly!
     
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    updated....my fav is #1. What do u guys/gals think?
     
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    You did well without the flash. Unlike PF, I might have liked them a little darker. A half stop?

    Though probably unnecessary, I like the blurring in 3 and 4. Was that done in camera?
     
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    Yeah those were done in camera. Really all I did is used a couple filters and added some light to give it an effect by using a reflector. (which i didnt have).
     
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    i love 3
    she looks awkward in 1

    but overall they look good!
     
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    Thanks!
     
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