Sun Flowers

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  1. Mgw189

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    I think the composition works well, but there's something about it that's not wow-ing me, I can't put my finger on it. Too much clutter(?) with the leaves and yellow flecks from the other flowers showing maybe? I'm not sure.

    Something about it bugs me, afraid I can't get more than that out of it :(
     
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    I like the angle and composition, but what's bugging me about it is the one yellow petal that reaches fairly far into the center of the top flower. Overall though, a cool picture
     
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    yeah, the petal annoys me too. and the leaf that's reaching over the center of the 2nd flower does the same. only a bit cluttered at the bottom; i feel like it doesn't balance out the sky for some reason. but a good photo nonetheless :)
     

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