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[vintagesnaps]

I think the yellow seems overpowering although I like the idea of it (maybe too much of a good thing). I don't know if I'd like that much foreground or not because what I notice is the tree trunk from below going straight up thru where they're standing. And she's partially blocked by the railing/fence post going straight up the middle of her, their positioning and/or the vantage point isn't working for me.

 

[D-B-J]

I think the yellow seems overpowering although I like the idea of it (maybe too much of a good thing). I don't know if I'd like that much foreground or not because what I notice is the tree trunk from below going straight up thru where they're standing. And she's partially blocked by the railing/fence post going straight up the middle of her, their positioning and/or the vantage point isn't working for me.

Yeah, I'll wholly admit it's execution needs work. This was a new "test" or "type" of shot for me, and I see many things that can be improved (like you said).

Cheers!
Jake