Two Teens!

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  1. twocolor

    twocolor No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    I never know what to call these shots. They aren't senior portraits, they're just a set of teenagers!

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    So on this one, she wouldn't sweep her bangs out of her eyes. I personally do not like the hair in the eyes thing, so I cropped it for a little artisticy style. Is okay or no?
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    let me know what you think!
     
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    Did you use natural light, reflectors, flash, ubrellas? Thanks, I have been working on lighting:)
     
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    twocolor No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    on the outdoor ones, I used natural light with one reflector. On the studio ones, I used one light with umbrella to the right, and a reflector opposite that. Then my fill light is a large softbox immediately above the camera.

    any other thoughts?
     
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    Thanks for the lighting info, I enjoy doing oudoor portraits and am working on getting even lighting like you have:) They are great by the way! Eyes are very sharp! Any one lens used for most or a were several used? Thanks
     
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    twocolor No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    my new baby that makes those awesome eyes is a 50mm 1.4 I've had it for about a month, and it has made such a difference for close up shots. Crystal clear!
     
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    The third shot and seventh shot are my favorites! Nice work!
     
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    I'm loving number 6. I love the tilted composition. The track leads you right to the subject, great shot!
     
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    Good work as usual TC... I'm not sure I'm fond of the bisected face in #2. I think the concept is good, but for me, I'd prefer it right down the middle....
     
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    I think you did a great job. I really like these. I think your crop of #2 looks good. I love #3, probably my favorite.
     
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    I like the set! Nice shots. Number 9, her head position just looks a bit awkward to me.
     

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