Urban War

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  1. JEazy

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    Took this snap awhile ago on the way to a concert from the back of a friends car. We were parked and I saw these kids playing and thought it would be a great photo opp. Comments or critiques?
     
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    i think you shot it adroitly.
    good shot!
     
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    Nice one J!! Good eye! : )
     
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    I'll be honest. I think the composition is too busy, my eye wanders all over the place, and I don't get a sense of 'urban war'. The conversion has left the shadows a little too dark for my taste on this *particular* image. A little too much contrast?

    I like the idea, and I understand that it was probably a quick snap, so take these words with a grain of salt and understand that this is just my opinion on this image.
     
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    Nah it's cool, i also think it's pretty busy for my taste. Thanks for the comments though.
     

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