Waiting for Fries

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  1. sillyphaunt

    sillyphaunt TPF Noob!

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    I took these 2 of my nephew as we waited for his "fEYEs" at McDonalds. I like the 1st just because it says exactly how he was, bored and impatient for his food.. But I really wanted the critique on the 2nd one.. Is there anything I could have done in photoshop to make it better? do you think it should be tighter cropped? I can't decide if I like it or not.

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    I'd tighter crop the second one down to portrait. His ear is blown as well... and the light "break" across his head is distracting.

    I'd try "flash fill" in paint shop - I think the equivalent in photoshop is equalise but not sure. Apart from that, its a great shot. The positive side is he is as cute as all get out... and his little face is nicely highlighted (if you know what I mean)
     
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    I've no idea how to improve the second one now, but the first one is wonderful!!
     

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