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  1. jenny6165

    jenny6165 TPF Noob!

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    This is one of the first photos i took at college in the first term. Its not my final one cos its all scratched up. I shot it on a 35mm slr and dont have a scanner, so ive actually taken this photo from my digi cam which is why it looks a bit disorientated.
    it was based on our cityscape/landscape project.

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  2. Chase

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    It looks interesting, but it is a little small to really get a good feel for it. Do you have a larger vesrion you can share with us?
     
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    From what I can see the composition is nice, but as Chase said, it's a bit small to tell what's going on.

    Also - if you're photographing photos instead of scanning them, make sure they're well lit and turn off your digicam's flash - that way you won't get the bright flash burst that (I think) wasn't in your original photo.
     

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