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  1. Peter_pan91

    Peter_pan91 TPF Noob!

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    Not really sure for what, but i hope you enjoy the image:



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    Critiques are welcome,


    Peter
     
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    interesting... do you have a larger version?


    in my opinion, this might make a better landscape shot... I don't know... to small to tell.
     
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    Interesting, I like it. The slats in the bench lead the eye right to the woman. I just wish the sky wasn't blown out.
     
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    I was the exact opposite... I started at the woman, and the slats lead me right out of the picture. That's probably only because I saw the top half of the picture first though.
     
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    Dagwood56 No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Hmmmm, now that you mention it, maybe that is what it does.....either way, its interesting. :D
     
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    Nice capture.

    I think a landscape version of the same image might work as well. I resized my window to show me landscape and it looked decent. I find that there are alot of slats and it dominates the picture a bit too much. Going horizontal would allow you to keep the woman the same size, keep a similar effect of leading the viewer, but have her as more of a dominant figure
     
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    i love this shot, but prefer a tighter square crop. it balances out the interest, and the space.


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    nice crop!
     
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    Funny, for me too the first word that came to my mind was "interesting". I had to go out and come to see that my eyes go from closer back to the girl. Any image that makes you pause for a moment and think [anything at all] has merit.
     
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    tanks eh.
     
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    invisible Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    Absolutely love the composition of the original image. Only thing I'd change is maybe do something about the (lack of) sky – adding some vignetting, perhaps – and clone out the "thingy" on the top right-hand side.

    Two thumbs up from me.
     
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    Beautiful! Love the lines of the bench leading to the person sitting. I personally like the portrait(original) crop better because the wooden planks in the foreground add so much more depth then if it were cropped...it's what makes the shot

    :thumbup:
     
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    Nicely done :thumbup:
     
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    + 1


    I would just get rid of the bird (?) in the top right.
     
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    I was thinking that too, but it doesn't matter u got a good one. I supprised she didn't see you, lucky.
     

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