Well Done, Denise!

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  1. PrecociousEmber

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    Let me know what you think. I personally think I did very well on this one... for not having a whole lot of knowledge, but how can I improve?
     
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    great crop and color!

    i would suggest somehow getting a wider depth of field (higher f-stop) but at this close range, it wouldnt fluctuate much between the petal layers because they arent that far apart. welcome to tpf!
     
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    :) thanks for the help. i'm glad to be here.
     
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    Usually a great fan of well saturated colours, I'd love to also see this one in a slightly more desaturated version...

    And hey! Warm welcome to this forum! I'm sure you'll enjoy being here - I am already enjoying your photo(s) :).
     
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    Works a treat for me. Well done.
     
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    thank you, guys! :)
     
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    lafoto, will this satisfy your craving? :drool:

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    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Hey :D, thanks.
    Yes, probably it's only me, but I like this one better :) More natural in the centre of the flower...
     
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    no, i agree. the original was kinda bright.
     

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