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Below are some photos I took for a friend's daughter's first birthday. Let me know what you think. I did minimal editing other than cropping, except on the one in the high chair, I added the "zoom" blur just for fun.
 

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They are crisp clear photos, the lighting is very good. I like them! I think the best thing about photographing children is to get down on their level, as shown in the middle right shot.
 
The first is a bit underexposed, but otherwise the exposure looks fine to me. I am not sure about the effect on the highchair; it seems like it was added to "pretty up" just an OK shot. It's hard when you have a subject that moves as much as a baby, but the same (well, better) effect can be achieved in camera.

You've got a good mix of portrait/landscape. One thing you should pay more attention to is framing, it's really tight right now and there are many missing fingers & toes. In the forth, it would have been good to include the entire hat.
 
What happened in #2?
some tips.. Go down to babies level, caputre emotions, never take photos when someone else is taking them and your subject is looking towards them (last pic)
 
Janineh, thanks for the advice. In the last pic, someone else was not taking a photo, they were looking at a big toy that someone was bringing her. I'm not much for asking people to pose and look at the camera when I shoot, so my biggest thing is to be able to move quicker, and catch better shots when they are available. I certainly appreciate the advice about getting on the baby's level, that has been the toughest thing to do. As explained in my first post, #2 the zoom blur was added just for effect, however, it doesn't appear that it worked that well, and I appreciate the constructive criticism from all of you.
 

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