2 beaches in france (fisheye)

[milanphoto]

Hi, here is 2 photos of 2 beaches in France shot with a fisheye. The first has been already posted but I made changes :

 

[milanphoto]

Anybody?

 

[wyogirl]

I don't really like the first one... it just doesn't hold my attention. I do however, like the second one a lot. I would maybe like to see the shadows brought up just a little in #2.

 

[Designer]

Anybody?

The first one should be leveled. The second one is nice.

 

[oldhippy]

The first is to busy. I love the boat, but then my eye goes to the sail thing, and then the houses. The boat would have made a great theam in itself.
in two I feel the wooden breakwater take my eye straight out, but then there is this sun on the other side. Use you leading lines to the primary object. I hope this is helpful. Ed

 

[milanphoto]

Thanks for your replies.

I see what you mean Ed but I wanted to show everything on the beach ( too much ? )
And wyogirl I don't understand what " brought the shadows" means ? I'm french sorry

 

[Designer]

I don't understand what " brought the shadows" means ?

To "bring up the shadows" means to lighten the shadows. I took the liberty to give it a try:

 

[milanphoto]

Ok thanks