2 more C&C

[qsfarmer]

I actually tried to unsoften these... Let me know what you think taken in Jerome AZ as well...

 

[thingsIsee]

I like these much better. Much better back drop and comp. Her face seems to be over exposed though. Lots of shine on her cheeks

 

[qsfarmer]

I cant seem to get that "shine" off....

 

[thingsIsee]

do you have a PL filter. might help if it's from the camera, if its from PP check your adjustments and see if you can bring it down.

 

[qsfarmer]

PL filter? help me out here dumb it down lol Im still learning all the lingo..

 

[thingsIsee]

Polarizing filter, it’s sun glasses for your lens. There are even ones you can get for point and shoot cameras. Not sure what you are using.
You could try stepping down the high lights in you soft ware a bit as well. This will decrease the brightness of the shot, but only the high intensity spots, then you can compensate with increasing the exposure a bit. This might get rid of or at least reduce the glare from her cheeks.

 

[qsfarmer]

Im shooting with nikon d3000 and yep I have a PL I havent tried using it yet Ill try that this weekend...

 

[DirtyDFeckers]

The colors are way over saturated.

 

[Davor]

It looks like she is out of focus, or is that just because her skin is too soft. Love the background in the second one, but again it looks like the rocks are more focused that she is.